comments on first draft

One of the problems that I had with my paper was that I used a title page, which isn't part of the MLA guidelines. I need a thesis statement. What I thought was one, apparently isn't a thesis statemnet. I need to explain why I have put in my paper and why. I need to explain things better. My conclusion needs to answer my main question that I asked in the opening introduction. I also need to have an argument presnt in and throughout my paper. The tone of my paper was okay. I also need to make my main points more clear.