1st peer review

My partner for my first peer review was my neighbor in class Jamie. She was the one who was going to critique my paper and hand it back to me, as I would correct her paper also and hand it back to her. While reading her paper, which was also about tetxing while driving, I learned a lot. I also saw how each person has a different way of writing their paper, as to the words they use, the way they set it up, and even to their opening and closing statements. Her paper gave me ideas for mine, as top changing my opening statement and to make it more interesting. She also made corrections on my paper which made me understand what I did wrong and what I needed to change to make my paper overall better.